This is my persuasive writing I made hope you enjoy
My complete opinion is that the scientist should not let people use invisible potion.
This scientist may not know any side effects. This potion may hurt someone, make someone go crazy or have a bug of some sort.
This effect can make someone want to do something bad like rob someone steal money or make someone make an explosion.
This scientist may not have made an antidote and the potion could not be made right. He would need an antidote because this potion has not been tested. An antidote would make this potion safe if it was right if the scientist can make it right.
This potion could be used for crime. People can use this to rob a bank steal from someone or steal a very valuable item. All the money might be stolen and we have no money to spend.
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