Persuasive writing

This is my persuasive writing I made hope you enjoy

My complete opinion is that the scientist should not let people use invisible potion.  

This scientist may not know any side effects. This potion may hurt someone, make someone go crazy or have a bug of some sort.

This effect can make someone want to do something bad like rob someone steal money or make someone make an explosion.

This scientist may not have made an antidote and the potion could not be made right. He would need an antidote because this potion has not been tested. An antidote would make this potion safe if it was right if the scientist can make it right.

This potion could be used for crime. People can use this to rob a bank steal from someone or steal a very valuable item. All the money might be stolen and we have no money to spend.

Geometry

This shape can be folded in half and still be the same  if I tried to fold this diagonally it would not work.  If I Tried to fold it downwards it would be the same.

Persuasive writing

My honest opinion is that  we should be allowed to ride scooters in schools.

To start with we could help someone to do a trick in a safe environment.

We can show someone how we can learn and then teach. We also could help someone up to help you with your passport.

Secondly we get to give our brains a break to have fun when we scooter. On a scooter we can take our mind off something that was really hard and have a brain reset time. When we ride our scooters we can have fun and help our brains have more energy.

Finally we get to meet new friends, get motivated and get a chance to show leadership. We can get outside and get moving rather than staying inside all day.

Therefore believe that we should be allowed to ride scooters in school.

Moon DLO

This is a moon slideshow I made