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Monday 7 November 2016

Persuasive writing

My honest opinion is that  we should be allowed to ride scooters in schools.

To start with we could help someone to do a trick in a safe environment.
We can show someone how we can learn and then teach. We also could help someone up to help you with your passport.

Secondly we get to give our brains a break to have fun when we scooter. On a scooter we can take our mind off something that was really hard and have a brain reset time. When we ride our scooters we can have fun and help our brains have more energy.


Finally we get to meet new friends, get motivated and get a chance to show leadership. We can get outside and get moving rather than staying inside all day.

Therefore believe that we should be allowed to ride scooters in school.

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