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Wednesday 16 March 2016

Our Spectacular Trip To Spencer Park

Our Spectacular Trip To Spencer Park


Three days ago the Senior Syndicate went to Spencer Park. It was spectacular. We went by bus.  Room 7 and 8 were on the second bus and room 5 and 6 on the 1.We went to have fun and also so the teacher’s could find out more about the kids.

First the Teachers gave us instructions. We did those things ate morning tea then we played sport or on the playground. I played hide and go tag i did not get tagged I played with my friends It was so fun after morning tea I was exhausted but I got to the beach with the others.We had to dig a hole in team’s the team i was in was the same as the other team’s but one of my teammates went head first into the hole we got her out and kept digging later we did another activity we made a hero in different team’s this time we weren't sure who we built so we just called him Mekai. I was working with my big brother Philip we made it with sticks Philip’s hat and some shells I recon It was amazing then we went back ate lunch played on the playground I played hide and go tag again i got tagged Amazingly. The person was in front of me but It  was tricking me.It was Amazing.Luckily I was in time and tricked him back just as we went back to school i saw some spectacular things like flowers Trees It was Awesome I also saw a lake it was real Fun at Spencer Park.I want to go back again.By Nathan

4 comments:

  1. I like how you have put words in red.
    After you have written the story can you go back and check to see if it makes sense?
    I like going there and playing on the fun stuff.

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  2. I love how you did the title and the color that you chose congratulations you have won my amazement.

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