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Friday 24 November 2017

The Midnight thump

This week we wrote a story about a monster and a kitten. We had to have a twist.
Thump!


The Monster woke from his slumber during the predator hour. One thump after another the monstrous thing got closer and closer to whatever it was hunting.
Everything big and small was afraid of this monster. No one ever goes out at midnight ever no one but this monster. The monster walked through the forest destroying anything in his way.
When he came to stop a mighty roar came out of his mouth then he just froze. The Monster's head moved he was now looking at the dark night sky then he ran far far away.
When he finally came to another stop he was staring at a pitch black little house it was almost like he was bound to this place.


The whitest puny kitten in all the land was in his slumber. The kitten was not slumbered though, he knew of the dangers. The kitten laid some traps, some balls, creaky floorboards and an alarm. Bang Bang Boom. The giant broke through the rotten door leading to the interior of the the worn down cottage. The kitten also had some spikes close to his bed. The kitten had a quick escape if he needed it.


The monster took his first step he feel over the balls. The kitten knew basic escape maneuvers and executed them perfectly. The kitten also dug his claws into this monster. Ouch that hurt! Why did you do that!  
The kitten was gone far far away. The giant lost the kitten and was forced back into slumber.


   


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