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Wednesday 2 August 2017

greedy mouse

The Greedy Mouse


The greedy little mouse was using all his energy trying to move but then…
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`One day a greedy little mouse was looking for food. He found some tomatoes in a bucket and thought mm delicious tomatoes they will be nice for dinner. He took some tomatoes and started moving them back to his house. The tomatoes were too tempting he stopped to eat one then another and another. A few minutes later he had eaten almost all the tomatoes and night was falling there was one tomato left he ate it but then something colossal lurked in the shadows. Then a face appeared the mouse was frightened and ran for his life. But all the tomatoes he ate were his downfall so he could not run he was now sad. He escaped the prison that was downstairs in the man's basement. The mouse found his way out of the house never to be seen again. The mouse lived the rest of his days hunting for food far far away from the man’s house. The mouse never forgot that moment.

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