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Wednesday 5 April 2017

Spcetacular mud


Today we played in mud it was horrible but this is what i thought of it. 

4 comments:

  1. I like the title of the mud writing n
    good work

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  2. I like the wow words. Next time name the link .
    and the writing is fantastic!!!My favorite part is about the mud smelling like decaying socks just from a pig stein.

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  3. Hi Nathan I like your "WOW" words maybe next time you could not make your font go off your page.but anyway Great job the writing is fantastic!!!

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  4. I like the sentence today we played with the squishiest ever but next time please put the work in your page :) LOGAN http://shslogann.blogspot.co.nz/search?updated-max=2016-11-18T12:27:00%2B13:00&max-results=7

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