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Friday, 2 June 2017

Antarctica description

WALT: Write a description with the correct structure.
For writing we are writing about Antarctica. We went to the Antarctica center to learn, then we came back to write and share are writing to you guys. Here it is.


The Coldest Place on Earth

Antarctica is the coldest place on earth and it’s only a huge lump of ice.

Antarctica is a massive, frozen, icy, desert. It is home to 70% of the fresh water. In the summer Antarctica has 24 hour daylight and in winter 24 hours darkness.

Antarctica is larger than Europe or Australia.Antarctica is 14 million km. Antarctica is a continent it has lots of land and rock underneath all of that ice and snow.

Antarctica isn't just an ice land it is filled with wildlife. The wildlife
Is a combination of flying, swimming, and land animals. Almost all animals are predators to something even fish are predators.

Antarctica is full of awesome experiences that can’t be seen anywhere else. Antarctica is definitely going on my travel list.

     

2 comments:

  1. Hi Nathan, my name is Ellie, I am year 6 at St Bernadette's School. I like your description and all the information about Antarctica, maybe next time could you add some pictures of the ice, I also like learning about the Antarctica, I would like to go there too. Keep up the good work.

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    1. Thanks for the comment Ellie sorry i took so long to reply. Thanks for the idea i will be sure to add more pictures in other post.

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