I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey Nathan, What an awesome logo. From looking at it and trying to make connections I am thinking - you like math, the colour green, racing and maybe are Māori? I am also thinking maybe it is in the shape of a ball because you like football or rugby? How many of these are correct? Am I right? Something to improve this would be to make the background white as the squares behind are quite distracting.
Kia ora Nathan, I liked the way you are investing in your learning time into creating a better logo, so you can use that learning for the Uru Mānuka Cluster Logo competition. Did you think about the way the different colours work together as it looks like you have put a lot of thought into this? I agree with Miss Morgan, you need to use a white background not a transparent one as this makes your logo not look as professional. Is the chequered flags about go kart racing?
Hi Nathan, I'm Joei from Awahono School. I like the Logo you have made that shows your life. What made you think of making this amazing art? It made me think of a drawing I did about me.
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Hey Nathan,
ReplyDeleteWhat an awesome logo. From looking at it and trying to make connections I am thinking - you like math, the colour green, racing and maybe are Māori? I am also thinking maybe it is in the shape of a ball because you like football or rugby? How many of these are correct? Am I right?
Something to improve this would be to make the background white as the squares behind are quite distracting.
Kia ora Nathan, I liked the way you are investing in your learning time into creating a better logo, so you can use that learning for the Uru Mānuka Cluster Logo competition.
ReplyDeleteDid you think about the way the different colours work together as it looks like you have put a lot of thought into this?
I agree with Miss Morgan, you need to use a white background not a transparent one as this makes your logo not look as professional.
Is the chequered flags about go kart racing?
Hi Nathan, I'm Joei from Awahono School. I like the Logo you have made that shows your life. What made you think of making this amazing art? It made me think of a drawing I did about me.
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