Chapter 5 The unstoppable force
Years later the king and the alliance live in peace not worrying about the world. But right before their eyes an alliance charged into the realms they took and started taking back their land the king and the alliance leader charged into battle after 2 weeks of on and off fighting the alliance and the king had saved their realms but if attacked again could fall. With massive casualties on both sides the war had come to an end both the sides lost men and land. But 2 days later the king charged with just his troops to take back the lost land he built a new kingdom left some troops there and told the alliance leader what he did the alliance leader said “you have built a new kingdom without thinking about what could have happened” the king said “i moved forward to stop the massive alliance blind sighting us and massacring us i am getting my men to build a wall to at least stop them charging us unprepared”
I really like the story. You used a lot of good words. However, you need to work on your punctuation.
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