Today for writing we are making a poem about our new school. It was a really cool experience trying to write this because I could write so much it was awesome. we had to write about what we see, feel, smell, touch and hear.
Te-Manu-Tukutuku poem
When I walked into our brand new school all I heard was the great gigantic gasp of my classmates around me.
I saw all of the awesome furniture and the new garden growing . The smell of paint and the new furniture helped me settle in nicely. Touching the brand new soft warm carpet on the walls was like touching a newly formed cloud. It couldn't be any easier to settle into a room like this I would love my home to be like this. This term will be the best term in my life time (sigh of relaxment).
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