My many colored days
I’m am trying to do eight or nine lines of writing
I’m am trying to add all my punctuation
Attempt 1.
When I’m red I’m a devil a rebel at war.
When I’m blue I’m lazy got nothing to do.
When I’m grey I’m chatting no stopping at all.
When I’m black I’m scared to hear a noise.
When I’m brown I’m sleepy I’m messing around.
When I’m yellow I’m thrilled gilled like a fish.
When I’m green I’m clean working nonstop.
Then the colors come together I don’t know where who or how I am
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Attempt 2.
When I’m red I’m energetic not really a devil
When I’m blue I’m lazy I have got nothing to do I’m not moving at all.
When I’m grey I’m chatting no stopping at all.
When I’m black I’m scared to hear a noise.
When I’m brown I’m heavy like nothing’s small
When I’m yellow I’m thrilled gilled like a fish that's free.
When I’m green I’m clean working nonstop.
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Attempt 3.
When I’m red I’m energetic not really a devil
When I’m blue I’m lazy I have got nothing to do I’m not moving at all It's almost like there's nothing there.
When I feel grey I’m chatting no stopping at all even though no one is listening just annoying me
When I feel black I’m scared to hear a noise.
When I’m brown I’m heavy like nothing’s small
When I feel yellow I’m thrilled gilled like a fish that's free.
When I’m green I feel clean working nonstop.
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Attempt 4.
When I’m red I’m energetic not really a devil
When I’m blue I’m lazy I have got nothing to do I’m not moving at all.
When I feel grey I’m chatting no stopping at all even though no one is listening.
When I feel black I am a bull ready to pounce at my bait
When I am a brown bear I’m heavy like nothing’s small
When I am yellow I’m thrilled gilled like a fish that's free.
But some days all the colors come out on the same day but at least it's all me.
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